Thursday, June 20, 2013

Chapter 2 Going Deeper Mind Story

We are all unique and we are needing in this world even though we might not be seen as valuable. We think deeply before we take action and we would be the first to sense danger. But we are usually quiet and inverted. It is time to let people know how we think, what goes on in our heads by writing an adventure story that shows what our body and mind is like.

Cast

Brennan      Nersy
Bray           Harue
Ember        Bonner
Mya


The Escape

Brennan stood up, when the last person arrived to the daily morning huddle. Today he planned to make sure everyone understood what needed to be done. Each had a job to do if they were going to get out of this alive.

Looking over to Ember, Brennan knew she looked like the weakest of them all, but she was the most important to make all this work out. He knew he would have to be tough with her to get her going.

He knew Ember could feel him looking at her but she refused to look up. Her eyes, with tears rolling down cheeks, stared down at her hands as the index finger continued to make circles over her thumb of her right hand.

Nersy, her husband paced back and forth behind her, not stepping more than a few feet out of her reach just in case she needed him. Brennan knew that Nersy would be angry at him once he realizes how much pain his wife will be in when things start moving.


Bonner slipped lower in his seat as his shoulders curled in to try to make him look smaller. Only a select few saw the pain he was in, though Brennan didn't think that even Bonner himself knew how much pain he was in. It was as if speaking of the pain was bad luck. He, himself, did not believe is such a thing, but he kept quiet just the same. Beside Bonner was Mya who was just as silent with her pain as her husband. She clung onto his hand with fear she would have to let go.

Brennan's eyes found Harue. He could see how unsure she was with having this meeting; by the way she looked at each one of them, wanting to make things better. He knew that once she made her mind up on something, everyone else would follow. Brennan wished he could take her into his arms and take her pain away. He was one of the few who knew just how strong she was. He loved her strength, her smile, her laugh. It might be a long time before he would hear her laugh again.

Taking a deep breath, he tore his eyes from the woman he loved.  There was no reason to put this off any longer.

''We are going to do this now, no thinking, no turning back, and no second thought.'' They were not the words Bray had planned to say, but with one glance at his twin brother, he realized he took the words right out of Brennan's mouth.

''No, no, we cannot do this now.'' Nersy said as he stopped pacing and stood behind his wife. Ember reached up for his hand, looking for strength.

''Nersy, I can't do this, I am not ready yet.'' Ember said in a small voice.


Bray stepped behind his wife and gave her shoulders a gentle squeeze. Harue reached out and took Ember's arm and rubbed it. Brays felt the fluttery feeling of pride as he realized that his wife saw things his way. This gave him the strength to follow his brother with this. Now was the right time.

''We are doing this together; no one is being left behind.'' Bray heard in Bonners voice that he too was with them now. Bray felt the tension leave his body as each one of this little group decided that he was right. They all had to leave together and they all had to agree to do this.

There was many times where Bray and his brother would disagree. Brennan would want Bray to be less emotional and be strong; stand up and fight for what they believe. Bray wanted his brother to see that the others needed to be taken care off and not ignored all the time. They needed time to adjust to change and not just jump into things without much thought.

Brennan took his eyes away from his brother's wife.

''There is no time to talk about this any more. We leave now!'' Brennan knew he might have been a little harsh but they needed to get going. He headed out, not bothering to see if anyone was following.

No one said a word as each helped each other out of the seats and started following Brennan. Nersy took Ember's hand and gave her a reassuring squeeze. He never let go of her hand as they followed the others. Mya and Bonner were in each others arms as they pasted Bray at the door. Bray took the end of the group, as he watched his wife turn to Ember. He knew she was whispering encouragement as they walked away. No one looked back.This was a big step, walking away, leaving without a word to the others. But as they moved forward, the negative stayed behind.

Cast
Brennan - left brain     Nersy - nervous systom
Bray - right brain        Harue - heart
Ember - emotions       Bonner - body
Mya - muscles 

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